Sep 19, 2024
Nice imagery and image building. I especially like the room filling up with smoke, isolating the protagonist even more than you did with words. I haven’t read you before but will be looking for your work.
Written by Ronald C. Flores-Gunkle
An aging octogenarion and humanist hanging on to his passions: his wife, his family, his writing, painting, photography, gardening and reading in bed.